Critique of my Personal Statement - urgently?

you have already sent it so stop worrying. As far as what my opinion of it is, well it is quite long but the picture it paints of you is a commendable one. It shows that you are pionate about accountancy, you have determination and drive. it shows that you have a wealth of experience in dealing with all types of people and adapting yourself to new surroundings. Pretty impressive. relax it sounds good! and well done! Hope you get what you are aiming for